评论作文的短语范文第1篇
一、命题作文应对策略
1、 揣摩题目中的暗示
题目中的暗示包含中心的暗示、选材的暗示、基本内容的暗示、重点的暗示。 例1 “在尝试中成长”
分析：
(1)中心的暗示： “成长”是本文着力表现的中心。“成长”一词理解是否到位直接关系到文章中心是否偏离。
(2)选材的暗示：“尝试”是突破口，什么尝试?什么叫尝试?回到了这个问题，就知道了写作的材料是可以很广泛的：精神上，某个方面的第一次感悟;生活里，某一个事件的第一次经历、第一次尝试;学习上，第一次的突破可以说，选材上是特别广泛的
(3)基本内容的暗示：尝试了什么，获得了怎样的成长，提升了什么能力，感悟到了什么样的情感，谁在尝试?这些在文题中都有暗示。必须是自己的、积极地尝试，内容上要求必须是积极向上的。
(4)重点的暗示：“在尝试中”规定了写作的重点应该是尝试，事件应当具体，“成长”是一个变化的过程，不是顿悟，强调写作的过程中应该侧重自己精神、情感等方面的变化，写出变化，所以，“尝试”和“变化”应该是这次作文的重点。也就是说在写作过程中，事件的每个发展阶段中应该有“成长”体现其中。
例2“因你而精彩”
分析：
(1)中心的暗示：对“你”的赞颂;
(2)选材的暗示：“你”是突破口，古今中外、人事物情、琴棋书画、花鸟鱼虫只要能给我们带来精彩的均可入围;
(3)基本内容的暗示：你是谁或什么，你怎么了或者说你有什么不寻常处，带来了怎样的精彩、感悟。
(4)重点的暗示：你怎么了或者说你有什么不寻常之处，带来了怎样的精彩，这才是文章中写作的重点，这一点写好了，文章也就成功了。 练习作文题目：“想看见你的美”
试着从四个暗示的角度分析，看写作的重点在哪里。(谁?想看见?你? 1
美?)
2、 审清文题中的修饰语
题目中有一些修饰语，对作文有具体的要求，这也需要我们在审题的时候加以注意
例“可喜的变化”
分析：文题中“可喜”二字对 “变化”起了限制的作用。其实，“变化”有两种，既有好的变化，也有坏的变化，此文修饰语规定了必须写好的变化。文中还要用富有表现力的材料写出变化的具体内容，并重点写变化后的情景，对比中强调后者，才能突出“可喜”之处。另外，文章还应有适当的议论，以便点出“可喜”的深刻内涵。
练习(二选一)
(1)命题作文：悄悄地提醒
要求：(1)写一篇600字左右的文章。(2)不得透露个人相关信息。(3)不得抄袭。
写一篇文章。 (2)以“身后的目光”为题目..
要求：①文体自选，诗歌除外;②字数不少于600字; ③文中不能出现含有个人信息的地名、校名和人名等。
3、审清题目的限定词
在一些中考命题作文中，会出现一些限定词，但是在写作中很多人不注意，往往会导致作文写作的过程中出现偏差。
例1“那是一首诗”
分析：
“一首”点明文章中应该是一个事件或者说是一个彼此有联系，能够和在一起的事件，决不能在写作的过程中写成几个片段，只照应主题，缺乏联系，导致变成那是“几首诗”。
例2“在我的世界里，一切都很美好”
分析：
“一切”很容易被忽略掉，那么什么是 “一切”呢?怎样表现“一切”呢?至少应该是两个或两个以上的方面才能被称为“一切”，比如学习和生活，比如学校、家庭、社会，比如物质和精神
练习题目：“那一刻，我的世界春暖花开”
要求：①文体自选。②文章不少于600字(诗歌不少于16行)。③文中不要出现真实的人名、校名、地名等。
4、审清题目前面的引导词
命题作文前的引导词是什么?为什么要有引导词?其实，引导词是对命题作文题目的进一步说明，是为了降低命题的难度或者规定命题的范围所采用的一种启发学生习作思路的方式，因此，审清引导词，然后和自己所审题所发现的信息互相印证，就能知道，命题作文该写些什么。
例1：
在成长的路上，尝试是人生的必修课。比如：尝试着举手发言，尝试着参加竞赛，尝试着克服困难，尝试着宽容待人每一次尝试不一定都成功，但一定会有收获。在尝试中，我们的智慧得到了增长，能力得到了提升，人性得到了升华。勇敢尝试吧，让我们在尝试中成长!
请结合自己的生活和体验，以“在尝试中成长”为题写一篇作文
分析：
“尝试着举手发言，尝试着参加竞赛，尝试着克服困难，尝试着宽容待人”显然是告诉了我们写作选材，“在尝试中，我们的智慧得到了增长，能力得到了提升，人性得到了升华”显然是告诉写作的中心，这样看来，与我们在第一项审题时是一致的。
练习
同学们，回首你的初中生活，一定会有一些值得怀念的往事，难以忘却的身影，记忆犹新的画面，如同闪亮的星子(星星)，将你记忆的夜空点燃得璀璨而美丽，那星子，或许是父母的关爱，师长的教诲，同伴的友情;或许是拼搏的汗水，成功的欢悦，自信的笑颜;或许是懊悔的泪光，成长的烦恼，青春的思索那星子虽然已经在夜空滑过，但它所闪耀的光辉却会永远与你相伴。请选取其中最明亮的，来铭记你的初中时代吧!
题目：如星子滑过夜空
要求：(1)写一篇不少于600字的文章;(2)内容具体，有真情实感;(3)文体不限(诗歌、戏剧除外);(4)文中请回避与你相关的人名、校名、地名等。
二、命题作文写作示例
岁月如画，生活如诗。在我们人生的道路上，有许多感人至深的诗篇，请撷取你感受最深的一节去尽情描绘，用心抒写。
题目：那是一首诗
审题：
①“诗”是让人感受温馨的显示卡，由文题中的“诗”字，我们可以确定，要写的内容一定是给我们以欣喜、感动、美好之类的东西，留在我们心底的一定是最深刻、最感人，且愈久愈香的记忆。引导词中“在我们人生的道路上，有许多感人至深的诗篇”也暗示了这一点。唯一需要做的，就是将“那”具体化。
②题目前的引导语既印证了我们的想法，又拓宽了我们的思路。它具体而又明确地告诉我们写作的内容，“岁月”“生活”，可以是某个时间，也可以是某一类生活，还可以是我们人生路上感受最深的一件事(“感人至深的诗篇”)。
确定写作内容：
我们在动笔前，最关键的就是给 “那”确定一个具体的指代内容，可以从以下几个方面考虑：
①指代时间。如“童年”“初三”“春天”“夏夜”等等
②指代地点。如“故乡”“XX宿舍”“清晨的校园”“晚自习时的教室”等等 ③指代人物。如“父爱”“奶奶的唠叨”“师恩”“友情”等等
④指代景物。如“那片草地”“那微黄的灯光”“那孤独的树”等等
⑤指代其他事物、事件等。如“名著”“活动”“精神”等等
巧妙组织结构：
①用小标题结构全文。如写“大自然是一首诗”时，就可以用四季的色彩来拟小标题：绿色序曲、红色乐章、黄色乐章、白色乐章，从而展现大自然的美丽。
②用课本剧结构全文。如写“XX宿舍是一首诗”时，就可以运用剧本的形式组织结构，幕启、寝室成员陆续登场、落幕，还可以设计话外音等，从而展现当代中学生的风采。
③用诗的结构组织全文。如写“初三是一首诗”时，就可以如此组合镜头：序酸，第一节苦，第二节辣，尾声甜。以此表现“我”对初三生活的感悟：刚进入初三，感到生活异样，接着尝到紧张之苦，临近中考感到竞争的火辣，中考揭晓感到收获的甜蜜。
评论作文的短语范文第2篇
2.人民生活水平的显著提高/ 稳步增长the remarkable improvement/ steady growth of people’s living standard
3.先进的科学技术 advanced science and technology
4.面临新的机遇和挑战 be faced with new opportunities and challenges
5.人们普遍认为 It is commonly believed/ recognized that
6.社会发展的必然结果 the inevitable result of social development
7.引起了广泛的公众关注 arouse wide public concern/ draw public attention
8.不可否认 It is undeniable that/ There is no denying that
9.热烈的讨论/ 争论 a heated discussion/ debate
10. 有争议性的问题 a controversial issue
11.完全不同的观点 a totally different argument
12.一些人 而另外一些人 Some people while others
13. 就我而言/ 就个人而言 As far as I am concerned, / Personally,
14.就达到绝对的一致 reach an absolute consensus on
15.有充分的理由支持 be supported by sound reasons
16.双方的论点 argument on both sides
17.发挥着日益重要的作用 play an increasingly important role in
18.对必不可少 be indispensable to
19.正如谚语所说 As the proverb goes:
20.也不例外 be no exception
21.对产生有利/不利的影响 exert positive/ negative effects on
22.利远远大于弊 the advantages far outweigh the disadvantages. 23.导致，引起 lead to/ give rise to/ contribute to/ result in
24.复杂的社会现象 a complicated social phenomenon
25.责任感 / 成就感 sense of responsibility/ sense of achievement
26. 竞争与合作精神 sense of competition and cooperation
27. 开阔眼界 widen one’s horizon/ broaden one’s vision
28.学习知识和技能 acquire knowledge and skills
29.经济/心理负担 financial burden / psychological burden
30.考虑到诸多因素 take many factors into account/ consideration
31. 从另一个角度 from another perspective
32.做出共同努力 make joint efforts
33. 对有益 be beneficial / conducive to
34.为社会做贡献 make contributions to the society
35.打下坚实的基础 lay a solid foundation for
36.综合素质 comprehensive quality
37.无可非议 blameless / beyond reproach
39.致力于/ 投身于 be committed / devoted to
40. 应当承认 Admittedly,
41.不可推卸的义务 unshakable duty
42. 满足需求 satisfy/ meet the needs of
43.可靠的信息源 a reliable source of information
44.宝贵的自然资源 valuable natural resources 45.因特网 the Internet (一定要由冠词，字母I 大写)
46.方便快捷 convenient and efficient
47.在人类生活的方方面面 in all aspects of human life
48.环保(的) environmental protection / environmentally friendly
49.社会进步的体现 a symbol of society progress
50.科技的飞速更新 the ever-accelerated updating of science and technology
51.对这一问题持有不同态度 hold different attitudes towards this issue
52.支持前/后种观点的人 people / those in fovor of the former/ latteropinion
53.有/ 提供如下理由/ 证据 have/ provide the following reasons/ evidence
54.在一定程度上 to some extent/ degree / in some way
55. 理论和实践相结合 integrate theory with practice
56. 必然趋势 an irresistible trend of
57.日益激烈的社会竞争 the increasingly fierce social competition
58.眼前利益 immediate interest/ short-term interest
59.长远利益. interest in the long run
60.有其自身的优缺点 has its merits and demerits/ advantages and disadvantages
61.扬长避短 Exploit to the full one’s favorable conditions and avoid unfavorable ones
62.取其精髓，取其糟粕 Take the essence and discard the dregs.
63.对有害 do harm to / be harmful to/ be detrimental to
64.交流思想/ 情感/ 信息 exchange ideas/ emotions/ information
65.跟上的最新发展 keep pace with / catch up with/ keep abreast with the latest development of
66.采取有效措施来 take effective measures to do sth.
67.的健康发展 the healthy development of
68.有利有弊 Every coin has its two sides.
No garden without weeds.
69.对观点因人而异 Views on vary from person to person.
70.重视 attach great importance to
71.社会地位 social status
72.把时间和精力放在上 focus time and energy on
73.扩大知识面 expand one’s scope of knowledge
74.身心两方面 both physically and mentally
75.有直接/间接关系 be directly / indirectly related to
76. 提出折中提议 set forth a compromise proposal
77. 可以取代 “think”的词 believe, claim, maintain, argue, insist, hold the opinion/ belief that
78.缓解压力/ 减轻负担 relieve stress/ burden
79.优先考虑/发展 give (top) priority to sth.
80.与比较 compared with/ in comparison with
81. 相反 in contrast / on the contrary.
82.代替 replace/ substitute / take the place of
83.经不起推敲 cannot bear closer analysis / cannot hold water
84.提供就业机会 offer job opportunities
85. 社会进步的反映 mirror of social progress
86.毫无疑问 Undoubtedly, / There is no doubt that
87.增进相互了解 enhance/ promote mutual understanding
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1把《雅思写作机经题源大全 》看了三遍，主要是记了上面的论据。上面的文章按类型分类，可以总结一下某一方面常用的搭配和句型。
2 我的写作邓老师让我把新概念3的文章背背，但我背了两篇就放弃了。不过我把新3上的文章都看了一遍，把觉得好的句子总结在了一个本上，然后背，尤其是快考试那几天每天背一遍，弄得很熟，所以用起来也很熟。大家一定要看啊!!!
3 关于模板：我觉得模板还是很有用的，但不是已有书上的模板，大家都知道的那些模板和句型最好少用。因为雅思作文一共五大类，我一般练得都是两边倒的作文，自己有准备一个模板，除了问原因解决类的作文外都可以用同一个模板，所以要练得比较熟，一般写作文都要用自己的模板。不过我考试时候还是碰上了问原因类的作文，所以最好是总结两个模板就万无一失啦~~。
4 当时邓老师让我基本上一天看一篇《经济学人》的文章，总结不会的单词、短语和句型，因为上面的文章都是老外写的，所以文章非常地道，好句子很多~~~ 5 上强化课前看过一遍十天突破雅思写作，觉得还是很不错的，对雅思写作有了比较全面的了解。但是上面的句型和模板最好不要用了~~ 6 关于写作文：我一共写了十篇左右的大作文，小作文要每种至少练一篇吧，快考试前一个星期我用专门的雅思考试写作纸卡时间，大小作文一起一起写，写了4套。我觉得大作文不在于要练的很多，但是要刻意的改进。写完一篇文章后要自己改一遍，把看的出来的语法和单词错误改了，还要看论据合不合理，再把看过的好的句型刻意套进去，然后如果有条件找给邓老师给改改。第一篇作文我写了一个半小时才写完，当时真是把所有能用的上的好句子和词组都尽量往里套。邓老师说第一篇要是半小时之内写完就是混的没好好写。尽快把能用的上的写作资料背熟，这样写作时间自然会减少，小作文必须20分钟搞定，如果你的模板和句子用的熟，大作文也会很流畅。我的雅思考试作文写了满满的2页考试纸后，又要了一张写了一半，还把小作文检查了一遍(真的检查出一个错~哈)。
7 除此之外，我还总结了四种句型，开头句型，写好处的句型，写坏处的句型和解决问题类句型。因为所有的雅思议论文题目基本上都是要讨论一个问题的好的方面和坏的方面，所以这样的句式要准备几个(不用太多)，而且确定自己背的很熟，最好是每篇文章都换的多用，达到用的灵活自如。在这里与大家做一下分享。
好句总结：
1 多用such替换the ,a . 例：Admittedly, such issue ,to some extent,has given rise to a bunch of familiar questions.(模板的第3段开头)
2 开头句型：(放在文章中间也很好的句子)
1 As a result of constant media attention , A(A指题目话题) , once largely ignored,has come to be seen as especially valuable/significant. 2 (The right of the media to do this )is rarely disputed, but (the way in which it does this )often comes under withering critism. (括号里可以换) 3 As our lives are saturated with the flood of (advertisements) ,no one can avoid being influenced by ads.(ads 错的，不能用简写哦~) 4 (Bad traffic and increasing pollution) are thorny issues challenging every major city in the globe.(in the globe全世界) 5 The issue of A is a complex and sensitive one . What lies behind ..? (问原因类) 6 After years in the wilderness , the term “ A ” seems posied to make a comeback.(和第一句意思比较像) 3 好处句型!!
1 Nothing can be compared with sb/sth ~~(新3的哦，推荐) 2 A exert a positive impact on .
3 A can an effective way to (help)(简单但好用) 4 Few things can be more (impressive)than .that (新3的哦，推荐) 5 play a pivotal role in
6 benefit from ../ profit from一般 7 promot the development of .. 8 A is the cornerstone of 9 remove the barrier for .. 10 raise one’s awareness of 常用 11 enable sb to do
12 sb is the ultimate beneficiary (sb是。。的最终受益者，社会问题类说人们应该自己也承担责任用)
13 consolidates its status as the .. 14 get a clear perspective of .. 15 give a boost to .. 16 A is an indispensable part of B 17 A is irreplaceable tp B 18 The signigicant of A to B can never be ingored 19 A is the key ingredient to B~~ 20 A made it possibe for sb to
21 A exert a peculiar fascination on a great many people . (新3的哦，推荐)
find it impossible to resist the temptation to do .
22 Needless to say / Indeed ,(可以放在任一句开头，很好用哦~) 23 develop an unshakable faith in 24 have a reputation of .. 25 Nothing can catch them for
26 make a contribution to (也可作写坏处的句子 the city make its own contribution to noise) 27 build bridges between 28 特别的
Improve one’s physical and psychological wellbeing /soundness 身体心理健康 optimise people’s living standards 提高人们生活水平 eradicate poverty 消除贫困 It’s not A that are important ,but B Satisfy basic (human) needs 满足要求
Ease the tension and conflicts between alleviate the problem of 消除冲突和紧张 Be fully aware of the consequences The impact of (sporting activities) goes far beyond the bounds of (leisure and recreation.) 3 坏处的句型
1 drive up the crime rate .. 2 widen the gap between A 3 pose a (direct) threat to
4 stifle creativity 5 diminish individual’s leisure time 6 spin out of control 7 cause(creat) tension and conflicts between
8 exert(have) detrimental/negative/adverse influence(impact)upon/on 9 is markly incompatible with与。。不协调 10 be afflicted with 11 deprive one of sth 12 sth is the root cause of 13 be saturated with sth 14 at the expense of . 15 be confronted with sth 16 run contrary to 17 erode the national identity 18 pose a dilemma for 19 is an vicious circle 20 hamper (scientific) progress 21 there is a yawning gap between 22 pose a devastating problem 23 the reputation is ruined 24 A is a complete failure 25 Things can go wrong on a big scale 26 sth is always faced with a difficult task /problem 27 It is impossible to 28 have (little) difficulties in doing 29pay the price for (fame) 30 (pollution) is the price we pay for( overpopulated ,over industrialized planet ) 31 people seem to fail to take into account the fact that .好句!! 32 lead to some unfavorable results 33 sacrifice .for
34 There is a major concern over t he world about . 35 give rise to a bunch of familiar questions 36This is compounded by the fact that
37 the problem of ( information overloaded ) exacerbated by (the growth )
38 The problem , however , is complicated by the existence of dozens of ..and by the fact that.. 4 解决问题类 小模板：
1Evidence suggests that a key step is to develop a policy on .,saying clearly (that..). 2Other policies (such as 。) can be taken to back up the policy . 3 One helpful step is to ,Another possibility is to improve . , so that . 4 It should be an addtion to the policy work ,not a substitute. 5 The more effort put in and wider (the whole school) involvement ,the substantial the results are likely to be . 1 give priority to sth 2 shoulder the responsibility to 3 comply with 4 impose restrictions on.. 5 take into account /consideration
6 should be increasingly focus onrather than
7 what will make the most difference is ..The new study makes this point even more starkly 8 There are ways of dealing with the topic through , . and .. Three factors are involved in this change.
新概念3+剑桥好句：
1 Apparently,there is a good deal of truth in this idea./There is an element of truth in both agreements 2More importantly/significantly,there is still good evidence that 3This is compounded by the fact that 由于。。的事实，使。。变得更糟 4Women,it is obvious, are freer than in the past. 插入语 5 has given rise to a bunch of familiar questions. 6 It’s not A that are important ,but B
7 Providing more parking area, in the long run ,has proved to be a practical way out in many large cities in the world.插
入语
8 Not only had the poor man been arrested ,but he had been sent to prison ,as well 9 It has been estimated that 据估计
10 Considering the amount she paid ,he was dear in more ways than one .非谓语 Fearing that she would never see Ratus again 11 use fewer materia resources and ,therefore,be much compatible with protecting the environment 12 avoid squandering money on 避免浪费钱在。。上 13 shoulder important responsibilities on major global issues 14These regions are fragile not just in terms of their ecology,but also in terms of the culture of their inhabitants. 25 Climate change ,whatever its causes,is a direct threat to their way of life.插入语
26 Cinema might, for example , have become pimarily a documentay form. for example放中间，好! 27 But what happened was that it became ,overwhelmingly, a medium for tekking stories. 插入语 28Unfortunately, they are the ones the organisation can least afford to lose. 29 There is an abundance of evidence to support the motivational benefits that result from carefully matching people to jobs. an abundance of 大量的，好!
30 Managers, must be sure ,therefore, that employees feel confident that their efforts can lead to performance goals. 插入语
31To varying degree, we all have secrets which
评论作文的短语范文第3篇
表列举：for example、for instance、that is to say
表补充：besides、in addition、moreover
表对比：on the one handon the other hand
in spite of
表原因：because of、thanks to、due to、owing to
表结果：therefore、thus、as a result、so
表结论：to conclude、in a word、in brief、to sum up
1、学校生活及学习成绩
Be getting on well with one’s study某人的学习越来越好
take several courses at school在学校学若干门课程
have English (Chinese, Physics) every (other )day work hard at
put one’s heart into专心于;致力于
be interested in
be fond of
like chemistry best
be good at ; be poor at ; do well in ; be weak in
make progress in ; fail in ’ be tired of ’
pass the examination; give sb. a passing grade;
major in history 主修历史
He has the best record in school. 他的成绩最棒。
get a doctor’s degree 获得博士学位
be more interesting to sb.
learn about; succeed in; be active in class (work);
take an active part in ; learn by heart;
work out a (maths) problem; improve oneself in ;
get 90 marks for (English); get an “A” in the exam;
have a good command of
lay a good foundation in (language study)
2、师生关系
get on well with sb; like to be with students;
be gentle with us; be kind to sb;
be a strict teacher; be strict with one’s pupils;
be strict in work
We think of him (her) as ; help sb with sth;
praise sb for sth ; blame sb for sth..
give advice on ; question sb on
be satisfied with
correct the students’ homework carefully and prepare for the next day; give sb a lot of work;try to teach sb good study habits; make one’s lessons lively and interesting; teach sb. sth.;teach sb to do sth.
devote all one’s time to work;
admire (sb.for) his devotion to the cause of education
佩服他对于教育事业的献身精神。
3、课余活动及周末生活 spend one’s time in many different ways; enjoy doing things by oneself; go swimming; go for an outing; have an outing at (the seashore); see the sights of Beijing; play the piano (violin); play chess (basketball); have a swim; have dances on weekends; have a picnic over the weekend; go to the cinema; have a party; hold a sports meeting; do some reading; help sb do sth; enjoy a family trip; get everything ready for; ride one’s bike with sb.to(the park); There are a lot of activities at (the beach). We enjoy a change from our busy life in the city. She would like to bring sth. to the picnic. It was a very relaxing Sunday. There are good programmes on TV on weekends.
4、彼此沟通信息 take a message for sb; send a message to sb; hear from sb; talk about/of sth; tell sb to do sth; get information about; express one’s idea (feelings) in English用英语表达一个人的思想(感情); Write sb a letter saying给某人写信说... ， apologize to sb for thank you for ; make a speech t at the meeting; explain sth to s; look upon sb as ; think sb to be ; take sb’s side
5、事件中人的态度 would like to do; allow sb to do; keep sb from doing (prevent sb. from doing); call on sb to do; be afraid to do (be afraid of ); fee like doing; insist on doing; drive sb. off; speak highly of sb; speak ill of sb; think highly of sb; force sb to do; offer to do; refuse to do; agree to do; regret doing; prefer to do A rather than do B; had better do; would rather (not) do.
6、事情过程 have the habit of doing; have no trouble doing; make up one’s mind to do; prepare sb for ; give up doing; do sth as usual; do what he wants us to do; set about doing; try one’s best to do=go all out to do; get into trouble; help sb out; do one’s bit for New China; wait for sb to do; find a way to do; make friends with sb; show (tell) sb. how to do; take (send) sb to ; I’m trying to find; I’m afraid we are out of ;
pass the time doing; feel a little excited about doing;
can’t help doing; do some good deeds to people;
be prepared for more hard work;
Some are doing A, others are doing B, and still others are doing C.
7、感观活动与思维活动
look around for ; look up (down) at ; catch sight of ;
take a look at ; hear sb do (doing); take notice of ;
take view of ; have a good understanding of ;
consider sb (sth) to be ; come to know;
realize that ; know that +从句
8、情感与欲望
be pleased with ; be delighted in doing;
take a pleasure in doing; be worried about;
feel surprised at
be sorry for ; be angry with sb for sth;
be angry about (为某事生气);
look forward to doing; wish to do; expect to do;
long for (long to do); be sick for one’s home;
have a strong desire to do ;
9、健康状况及治疗
be in good shape; be in good (poor )health;
feel weak (well, terrible, sick); have got a high (slight ) fever;
have a slight (bad) cold; take one’s temperature;
have got a pain in ; be good (bad) for one’s health(eyes);
It’s nothing serious. stay in bed until; save one’s life
10、其它
It (take)sb. some time to do; It is said that ;
be fit for; be short of; be well dressed;
miss the lecture (train); changeinto;
waste time doing; spend time doing; be busy doing;
have no choice but to do; I can’t help it. be in need of;
be mistaken about ; fall behind; catch up with;
on behalf of; instead of; be welcome to do;
Running, biking and swimming are popular in summer.
Skiing and skating are my favorite winter sports.
11、信件开头常用语
You letter came to me this morning.
I have received your letter of July the 20th.
I’m writing to you about the lecture to be given next Monday.
I’m writing to ask if you can come next week.
How time flies! It’s three months since I saw you last.
Thank you for your letter.
In reply to your letter about (the exhibition this year);
Let me tell you that
12、信件结尾常用语
Please remember me to your whole family.Give my best regards (wishes) to your mother.
Best wishes.
With love.
Wish you a pleasant journey.
Wish you success. Wish you the best of health. (luck)
Looking forward to your next visit to China.
Looking forward to the pleasure of meeting you.
Expecting to hear from you as soon as possible.
13、问路和应答
Go down this street
Turn night/left at the first crossing
It’s aboutmeters from here
You can’t miss it
In front of behind at/a the corner(不用in)
Pass two blocks
：“游客纷至沓来”这句话，很多学生不能用英语写出“纷至沓来”这个成语，但是可以用以下几种表达方式：⑴A large number of visitors come here
⑵There are lots of visitors coming here every day
⑶Many people visit here every day
⑷A lot of people pay a visit here every day
多使用过渡性词语使句子连贯
表列举：for example、for instance、that is to say
表补充：besides、in addition、moreover
表对比：on the one handon the other hand
in spite of
表原因：because of、thanks to、due to、owing to
表结果：therefore、thus、as a result、so
表结论：to conclude、in a word、in brief、to sum up
评论作文的短语范文第4篇
模版1
Some people believe (argue, recognize, think) that 观点1. But other people take an opposite side. They firmly believe that 观点2. As for me, I agree to the former/latter idea.
There are a dozen of reasons behind my belief. First of all, 论据1.
More importantly, 论据2. Most important of all, 论据3 .In summary, 总结观点. As a college student, I am supposed to 表决心或 From above, we can predict that 预测.
模版2
People hold different views about X. Some people are of the opinion that 观点1, while others point out that 观点2. As far as I am concerned, the former/latter opinion holds more weight.
For one thing, 论据1.
For another, 论据2.
Last but not the least, 论据3.
To conclude, 总结观点. As a college student, I am supposed to 表决心.
或 From above, we can predict that 预测.
模版3
There is no consensus of opinions among people about X(争论的焦点)。Some people are of the view that 观点1，while others take an opposite side, firmly believing that 观点2。As far as I am concerned, the former/latter notion is preferable in many senses. The reasons are obvious.
First of all, 论据1。
Furthermore, 论据2。
Among all of the supporting evidences, one is the strongest. That is, 论据3。
A natural conclusion from the above discussion is that总结观点。
As a college student, I am supposed to 表决心.
或 From above, we can predict that 预测.
Some people are in favor of the idea of doing X. They point out the fact that 支持X 的第一个原因。They also argue that 支持X 的另一个原因。
However, other people stand on a different ground. They consider it harmful to do X.They firmly point out that 反对X 的第一个理由。 An example can give the details of this argument: 一个例子。
There is some truth in both arguments. But I think the advantages of X overweigh the disadvantages. In addition to the above-mentioned negative effects it might bring about, X also may X 的有一个坏处。
Many people argue that 错误观点。By saying that, they mean 对这个观点的进一步解释。An example they have presented is that 一个例子。(According to a survey performed by X on a group of Y, almost 80% of them 赞成这个错误观点或者受到这个错误观点的影响)。
There might be some element of truth in these people’s belief. But if we consider it in depth, we will feel no reservation to conclude that 与错误观点相反的观点。There are a number of reasons behind my belief. (以下参照辩论文的议论文写法)。
Nowadays, there exists an increasingly serious social/economic/environmental problem. (X has increasingly become a common concern of the public). According to a survey, 调查内容说明这种现象的情况。(或者是一个例子)。
There are a couple of reasons booming this problem/phenomenon. 下面参照辩论式议论文的写法。
X has caused substantial impact on the society and our daily life, which has been articulated in the following aspects. 参照辩论式议论文的写法。
A dozen of measures are supposed to take to prevent X from bringing us more harm. 参照辩论式议论文的写法。
Based on the above discussions, I can easily forecast that more and more people will .. 1)We should take some effective measures.
2)We should try our best to overcome(con quer)the difficulties.
3)We should do our utmost in doing sth.
4)We should solve the problems that we are confronted(faced)with.
11.表示结论
1)In short，it can be said that... 2)It may be briefly summed up as follows. 3)From what has been mentioned above，we can come to the conclusion that ...
12.套语
1)It’s well known to us that ... 2)As is known to us，... 3)This is a topic that is being widely talked about. 4)From the graph(table，chart)listed above，it can be seen that ... 5)As aproverb says，“Where there is a will，there is a way. )开篇
1) Many nations have been faced with the problem of ...
2) Recently the problem has been brought into focus. 3) Recently the phenomenon has become a heated topic.
4) Recently the issue has aroused great concern among ...
5) Nowadays there is a growing concern over ... 6) Never in our history has the idea that ... been so popular.
7) Faced with ..., quite a few people argue that ... 8) According to a recent survey, ... 9) With the rapid development of ..., ... 八)结尾
1) From what has been discussed above, we can draw the conclusion that ...
2) It is high time that strict measures were taken to stop ...
3) It is necessary that steps should be taken to ... 4) In conclusion, it is imperative that ...
5) There is no easy method, but ...might be of some help.
6) To solve the above-mentioned problem, we must ... 7) In summary, if we continue to ignore the above-mentioned issue, more problems will crop up. 8) With the efforts of all parts concerned, the problem will be solved thoroughly. 9) We might do more than identify the cause ; it is important to take actions to ... 10) Taking all these into account, we ... 11) Whether it is good or not /positive or negative, one thing is certain/clear...
二、用于描写图表和数据
1. It has increased by three times as compared with that of 1998. 2. There is an increase of 20% in total this year. 3. It has been increased by a factor of 4since 1995. 4. It would be expected to increase 5 times. 5. The table shows a three times increase over that of last year. 6. It was decreased twice than that of the year 1996. 7. The total number was lowered by 10%. 8. It rose from 10-15 percent of the total this year. 9. Compared with 1997, it fell from 15 to 10 percent. 10. The number is 5 times as much as that of 1995. 11. It has decreased almost two and half times, compared with
三、用于解释性和阐述性论说文 1.Everybody knows that 2.It can be easily proved that 3. It is true that 4. No one can deny that 5. One thing which is equally important to the above mentioned is
6. The chief reason is that 7. We must recognize that 8. There is on doubt that 9. I am of the opinion that 10. This can be expressed as follows; 11. To take for an example 12. We have reason to believe that 13. Now that we know that
14. Among the most convincing reasons given, one should be mentioned
15. The change in largely results from the fact that 16. There are several causes for this significant growth in,first ,second ,finally 17. A number of factors could account for the development in
18. Perhaps the primary reason is 19. It is chiefly responsible of
20. The reasons forare complicated, And probably they are found in the fact
21. Here are several possible reasons, excerpt that 22. Somebody believes/argues/holds/insists/thinks that
23. It is not simple to give the reason for this complicated phenomenon
24. Different people observes it in different ways.
四、用于文章的开头 1. As the proverb says 2. It goes without saying tan 3. Generally speaking 4. It is quite clear than because 5. It is often said that
6. Many people often ask such question:“?” 7. More and more people have come to realize 8. There is no doubt that 9. Some people believe that
10. These days we are often told that, but is this really the case?
11. One great man said that
12. Recently the issue of has been brought to public attention.
13. In the past several years there has been 14. Now it is commonly held that but I doubt whether
15. Currently there is a widespread concern that 16. Now people in growing number are coming to realize that
17. There is a general discussion today about the issue of
18. Faced with, quite a few people argue that, but other people conceive differently.
五、用于文章的结尾 1. from this point of view 2. in a word 3. in conclusion
4. on account of this we can find that 5. the result is dependent on
6. therefore, these findings reveal the following information:
7. thus, this is the reason why we must 8. to sum up
9. as far asbe concerned, I believe that 10. It is obvious that 11. There is little doubt that
12. There is no immediate solution to the problem of , but might be helpful
13. None of the solutions is quite satisfactory. The problem should be examined in a new way. 14. It is high time that we put considerable emphasis on
15. Taking into account all these factors, we may safely reach the conclusion that ●过渡性句型：
1) this is true that... 2) This is true, no doubt, but... 3) ...also... 4) It is one thing to...; it is another to... ●描写图表和数据的句型 1) .. . rank first (both) in... 2) .. .in proportion to... 3) A is by far the largest... 4) As many as.... 5) The number is ...times as much as that of ... 6) The figure has nearly doubled/tripled, as against that of last year. 7) It accounts for 35% of... 8) By comparison with ..., it decreased/increased/fell from...to... 9) ...rise rapidly(slowly)
10) ...remain level... 11) ...reach ...
12)There is a slight/slow/steady/rapid rise/increase demand./income./population./prices./production./decrease/decline/reduction/fall/drop in 13) be on the increase/decrease/rise/decline (在不断的增加,减少,上升,下降) ●图表作文中的过渡、概括句型： 1) As can be indicated in the table, ... 2) As we could find out later， ... 3) As is revealed in the table，... 4) As the survey results show，... 5) This table provides several important points of comparison between，...
6) The two graphs depict the same thing in ...
7) The key findings taken from the surveys are as follows:
8) According to the figures given in the table, ... 9) This chart shows that ... 10) As is shown by the graph, ... 考研英语小作文开头常用短语句式 (1) With the (rapidly) growing popularity of (computers/private cars) in China, the quality of our lives has been considerably changed.
(2) With the (rapid) growth of (our
economy/population), many problems such as (water shortages/waste of energy/lack of professionals and chaotic management) are beginning to surface
(3) With the development of (science and technology/market economy), more and more/an increasing number of people come to realize that ...
(4) Currently there is a widespread/serious concern over (illegal publication/drug abuse/negative influence of western cultures).
(5) Nowadays, a heated debated/discussion about...is under way in China .some people believe that ..., whereas others argue that...
(6) There are some reasons for owning (private cars/ personal computers). To begin with,... Next,... Last, ... There are, on the other hand, many reasons against it. First, ... Second,... Finally,...
(7) There are many advantages and disadvantages in (owning a car).
(8) There are various /at least three ways/possible techniques/problems/methods to do something
(9) Smoking/Alcoholic beverage should be banned from college campuses for toe reasons. The first reason is that ... The second reason is that ... /On the one hand , ... On the other hand. ...
(10) The possible solutions of (the energy crisis/water shortages/these social problems) depend on three factors...
(11) The tow major reasons responsible for (the rapid economic growth /the widespread of fake products ) are... Chapter One 文章开头句型
1-1 对立法 : 先引出其他人的不同看法,然后提出自己的看法或者偏向于某一看法,适用于有争议性的主题.
[1]. When asked about....., the vast/overwhelming majority of people say that ....... But I think/view a bit differently.
[2]. When it comes to .... , some people believe that ....... Others argue/claim that the opposite/reverse is true . There is probably some truth in both arguments/statements , but (I tend to the proffer/latter ...)
[3]. Now, it is commonly/generally/widely believed/held/acknowledged that .... They claim/ believe/argue that ... But I wonder/doubt whether.....
1-2 现象法 引出要剖析的现象或者问题, 然后评论 .
[1]. Recently the rise in problem of/(phenomenon of) ... has cause/aroused public/popular/wide/ worldwide concern.
[2]. Recently the issue of the problem of/the phenomenon of ...has been brought into focus. ( has been brouth to public attention)
[3].Inflation/Corruption/Social inequality ... is yet another of the new and bitter truth we have to learn to face now/constantly.
----- To be continued !!
1-3 观点法 ----开门见山,直接了当地提出自己对要讨论的问题的看法.
[1]. Never history has the change of .. been as evident as ... Nowhere in the world/China has the issue/idea of .. been more visible/popular than...
[2]. Now people in growing/significant numbers are beginning/coming to realize/accept/(be aware) that...
[3]. Now there is a growing awareness/recongnation of the necessity to......Now people become increasingly aware/conscious of the
importance of ......
[4]. Perhaps it is time to have a fresh look at the attitude/idea that.......
1-4 引用法 ----- 先引出名人名言或者有代表性的看法, 来引出文章要展开论述的观点!
[1]. "Knowledge is power." such is the remark made by Bacon.This remark has been shared by more and more people .
"Education is not complete with graduation." Such is the opinion of a great American philosopher. Now more and more people share his opinion.
[2]."........." How often we hear such statements/words like those /this .
In our own days we are used to hearing such traditional complains as this "......".
1-5 比较法 ------ 通过对过去,现在 两种不同的倾向,观点的比较 , 引出文章要讨论的观点.
[1]. For years, ...had been viewed as ... But people are taking a fresh look now. With the growing ... , people ....... .
[2]. People used to think that ... (In the past, ....) But people now share this new. Chapter 2 文章中间主体内容句型
原因结果分析
3-1-1. 基本原因 --- 分析某事物时, 用此句型说明其基本的或者多方面的原因.
[1]. Why ... ? For one thing.. For another ...
[2]. The answer to this problem involves many factors. For one thing... For another...... Still another ...
[3]. A number of factors , both physical and psychological affect .... /both individual and social contribute to ....
3-1-2 另一原因 --------> 在分析了基本原因之后, 再补充一个次要的或者更重要时用!
[1]. Another important factor is ....
[2]. ... is also responsible for the change/problem.
[3]. Certainly , the ... is not the sole reason for .....
3-1-3 后果影响 --------- 分析某事物可能造成的后果或者带来的影响 .
[1]. It will produce a profound/far-reaching effect/impact on....
[2]. In involves some serious consequence for ........
比较对照句型
3-2-1. 两者比较 ---> 比较两事物, 要说出其一超过另一个, 或肯定一事物的优点, 也肯定其缺点的时候用 !
[1]. The advantages gained from A are much greater than the advantages we gain from B.
[2]. Indeed, A carries much weight when compared with B.
[3]. There is no doubt that it has its negative effects as well as positive effects.
3-2-2 . 两者相同/相似 ------> 比较两事物共同都有或者共同都没有的特点时用!
[1]. A and B have several thing in common. They are similar in that.....
[2]. A bears some sritiking resemblance(s) to B. Chapter Three 文章结尾形式
2-1 结论性--------- 通过对文章前面的讨论 ,引出或重申文章的中心思想及观点 .
[1]. From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that .....
[2]. In summary/In a word , it is more valuable .......
2-2 后果性------ 揭示所讨论的问题若不解决, 将产生的严重后果.
[1]. We must call for an immediate method , because the current phenomenon of ... , if allowed to proceed, will surely lead to the heavy cost of .......
[2]. Obviously , if we ignore/are blind to the problem , there is every chance that .. will be put in danger.
2-3 号召性 -------- 呼吁读者行动起来, 采取行动或提请注意.
[1]. It is time that we urged an immediate end to the undesirable tendency of ......
[2]. It is essential that effective measures should be taken to correct the tendency.
2-4 建议性 -------- 对所讨论的问题提出建议性的意见, 包括建议和具体的解决问题的方法.
[1]. While it cannot be solved immediately, still there are ways. The most popular is .... Another method is ... Still another one is .....
[2]. Awareness/Recognition of the problem is the first step toward the situation.
2-5 方向性的结尾方式 ---- 其与建议性的唯一差别就是对问题解决提出总的, 大体的方向或者
指明前景.
[1]. Many solutions are being offered here , all of them make some sense, but none is adequate enough. The problem should be recognized in a wide way .
[2]. There is no quick method to the issue of .., but .. might be helpful/beneficial.
[3]. The great challenge today is ...... There is much difficulty , but ........
2--6 意义性的结尾方式 --------> 文章结尾的时候,从更高的更新的角度指出所讨论的问题的重要性以及其深远的意义!
[1]. Following these suggestions may not guarantee the success, but the pay off might be worth the effort . It will not only benefit but also benefit .....
[2]. In any case, whether it is positive or negative, one thing is certain that it will undoubtedly ..
结尾万能公式
1. 结尾万能公式一：如此结论
Obviously(此为过渡短语), we can draw the conclusion that good manners arise from politeness and respect for others.
to sum up, in conclusion, in brief, on account of this, thus
Thus, it can be concluded that, Therefore, we can find that
2. 结尾万能公式二：如此建议
Obviously, it is high time that we took some measures to solve the problem.
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2.人民生活水平的显著提高/ 稳步增长the remarkable improvement/ steady growth of people’s living standard
3.先进的科学技术 advanced science and technology
4.面临新的机遇和挑战 be faced with new opportunities and challenges
5.人们普遍认为 It is commonly believed/ recognized that
6.社会发展的必然结果 the inevitable result of social development
7.引起了广泛的公众关注 arouse wide public concern/ draw public attention
8.不可否认 It is undeniable that/ There is no denying that
9.热烈的讨论/ 争论 a heated discussion/ debate
10. 有争议性的问题 a controversial issue
11.完全不同的观点 a totally different argument
12.一些人 而另外一些人 Some people while others
13. 就我而言/ 就个人而言 As far as I am concerned, / Personally,
14.就达到绝对的一致 reach an absolute consensus on
15.有充分的理由支持 be supported by sound reasons
16.双方的论点 argument on both sides
17.发挥着日益重要的作用 play an increasingly important role in
18.对必不可少 be indispensable to
19.正如谚语所说 As the proverb goes:
20.也不例外 be no exception
21.对产生有利/不利的影响 exert positive/ negative effects on
22.利远远大于弊 the advantages far outweigh the disadvantages.
23.导致，引起 lead to/ give rise to/ contribute to/ result in
24.复杂的社会现象 a complicated social phenomenon
25.责任感 / 成就感 sense of responsibility/ sense of achievement
26. 竞争与合作精神 sense of competition and cooperation
27. 开阔眼界 widen one’s horizon/ broaden one’s vision
28.学习知识和技能 acquire knowledge and skills
29.经济/心理负担 financial burden / psychological burden
30.考虑到诸多因素 take many factors into account/ consideration
31. 从另一个角度 from another perspective
32.做出共同努力 make joint efforts
33. 对有益 be beneficial / conducive to
34.为社会做贡献 make contributions to the society
35.打下坚实的基础 lay a solid foundation for
36.综合素质 comprehensive quality
37.无可非议 blameless / beyond reproach
39.致力于/ 投身于 be committed / devoted to
40. 应当承认 Admittedly,
41.不可推卸的义务 unshakable duty
42. 满足需求 satisfy/ meet the needs of
51.对这一问题持有不同态度 hold different attitudes towards this issue
52.支持前/后种观点的人 people / those in fovor of the former/ latteropinion
53.有/ 提供如下理由/ 证据 have/ provide the following reasons/ evidence
54.在一定程度上 to some extent/ degree / in some way
55. 理论和实践相结合 integrate theory with practice
56. 必然趋势 an irresistible trend of
57.日益激烈的社会竞争 the increasingly fierce social competition
58.眼前利益 immediate interest/ short-term interest
59.长远利益. interest in the long run
60.有其自身的优缺点 has its merits and demerits/ advantages and disadvantages
61.扬长避短 Exploit to the full one’s favorable conditions and avoid unfavorable ones
62.取其精髓，取其糟粕 Take the essence and discard the dregs.
63.对有害 do harm to / be harmful to/ be detrimental to
64.交流思想/ 情感/ 信息 exchange ideas/ emotions/ information
65.跟上的最新发展 keep pace with / catch up with/ keep abreast with
the latest development of
66.采取有效措施来 take effective measures to do sth.
67.的健康发展 the healthy development of
68.有利有弊 Every coin has its two sides.
No garden without weeds.
69.对观点因人而异 Views on vary from person to person.
70.重视 attach great importance to
71.社会地位 social status
72.把时间和精力放在上 focus time and energy on
73.扩大知识面 expand one’s scope of knowledge
74.身心两方面 both physically and mentally
75.有直接/间接关系 be directly / indirectly related to
76. 提出折中提议 set forth a compromise proposal
77. 可以取代 “think”的词 believe, claim, maintain, argue, insist, hold the opinion/ belief that
78.缓解压力/ 减轻负担 relieve stress/ burden
79.优先考虑/发展 give (top) priority to sth.
80.与比较 compared with/ in comparison with
81. 相反 in contrast / on the contrary.
82.代替 replace/ substitute / take the place of
83.经不起推敲 cannot bear closer analysis / cannot hold water
84.提供就业机会 offer job opportunities
85. 社会进步的反映 mirror of social progress
86.毫无疑问 Undoubtedly, / There is no doubt that
87.增进相互了解 enhance/ promote mutual understanding
88.充分利用 make full use of / take advantage of
89.承受更大的工作压力 suffer from heavier work pressure
90.保障社会的稳定和繁荣 guarantee the stability and prosperity of our society
91.更多地强调 put more emphasis on
92.适应社会发展 adapt oneself to the development of society
93.实现梦想 realize one’s dream/ make one’s dream come true
94. 主要理由列举如下 The main reasons are listed as follows:
95. 首先 First， Firstly， In the first place, To begin with
96.其次 Second, Secondly, In the second place
97. 再次 Besides，In addition, Additionally, Moreover, Furthermore
98. 最后 Finally, Last but not the least, Above all, Lastly,
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小说最吸引人的地方是思嘉的个性以及她的爱情故事。她的爱情不是充满诗意和浪漫情调的那一种，而是现实的和功利的。为了达到目的，她甚至不惜使用为人所不齿的狡诈伎俩。那么她的爱情故事为什么还那么引人入胜呢?原因很简单，这就是真实。是小说所设置的情景下完全可能发生的真实情况。真实的东西可能并不崇高，但更接近人们的生活，因而也更受读者喜爱。思嘉最初爱上的是艾希礼，却在他人口中听到艾希礼要订婚的消息。自信而聪明的思嘉决定在婚礼之前向艾希礼告白，却被艾希礼温柔而委婉的拒绝了。在思嘉最为沮丧的时候却发现她和艾希礼的对话被一个男人(瑞德)无意之中听到了.思佳丽，这一在美国动荡年代所诞生的出色的人物，她的优秀个性散发出无穷的光芒。她勇敢坚强，乐观向上，对生活顽强抗争，从不屈服。她处事雷厉风行，精明能干。最突出的一点就是她对爱情的执着。她所拥有天使般的脸蛋和魔鬼般的身材用修饰中国古代美女的话那就是沉鱼落雁，闭月羞花使得多少青年男子拜倒在她的石榴裙下。然而她对这些毫不在乎，她对爱情疯狂的执着。但是出于无奈，她分别嫁给了两个自己不喜欢的人。当再一次见到她钟爱的艾希礼时，依然像少女般疯狂地爱着他，不顾一切的向他倾诉钟情。这让我想到了中国封建时代的女子对爱情忠贞的另一种表达方式。以《孔雀东南飞》为例，一对男女要表现对爱的忠贞就要结为连理枝，他们的爱情是与婚姻紧密相连的。“君当作磐石，妾当作蒲苇，蒲苇韧如丝，磐石无转移。”当他们的爱情遭受别人的破坏时，为了表现对爱的执着，他们只有“自挂东南枝”了。然而思佳丽却不一样，在她的爱情观中，爱情与婚姻是可以分离的，或者说是一种精神上和肉体上的分离。她不在乎彼此都有的婚姻，抛开一切大胆的去爱艾希礼，争取自己的幸福，她并未将爱情套上礼义，道德的枷锁，她的爱情永远是自由奔放的。这也许是东西方文化差异造成的吧。爱的本质是不因表达方式的变更而变化的。思佳丽的大半生又是为爱所迷惑的。因为迷惑而做了很多错事。知道最后她才发现，原来她一直钟爱的艾希礼并不爱她，也不曾象她所想的那般优秀。其实她爱的并不是艾希礼，而是自己内心的一个完美形象。艾希礼越是拒绝她，她心中的那个形象就越完善这正应了中国的一句老话：得不到的就是最好的 而恰恰因为她错误的迷恋，才使她错了身边真正的幸福。这也给了我一个启示：人要学会明辨是非，不要让幸福从自己的指间溜走。 值得欣慰的是，在思佳丽的爱情世界里没有什么是为之已晚的，当她彻底的失去艾希礼，失去女儿，丈夫瑞德也已离她而去之后，她才意识到原来她真正爱的人是瑞德，她于是抛开心灵上的创伤与悔恨，相信自己一定能挽回瑞德的心。“不管怎样，明天又是另外的
一天呢!”如果许多人对爱情都能有这种乐观自信的态度，那么许多爱情的悲剧就不会发生了。
在品读《飘》的日子里，多少次我与之同喜、同闹、同悲、同笑。几许惆怅，几许欣喜，几许感慨，几许惊叹。掩卷息，留下的是强烈的震撼和一生的感动。
《飘》是以美国南北战争时期南方**的社会现实为背景的爱情小说.小说以亚特兰大及附近的一个种植园为故事背景,描绘了内战前后美国南方人的生活.以"乱世佳人"斯佳丽为主线,描写了几对青年的爱情纠葛.
初读《飘》时,对小说的女主人公的感觉是矛盾的既有些讨厌,但又不得不敬佩她.讨厌的是为了功利,为了钱等不择手段,而选择婚姻.甚至是不惜损害自己的妹妹,抢走了她的未婚夫;讨厌她面对白瑞特的爱时,那愚蠢的固执.但她的勇敢与坚强和那份艰苦创业的精神又不得不让我敬佩.
再读时,突然间感觉:斯佳丽那种对金钱和土地的狂热追求是可以理解的.在那种战争爆发的**的社会,她一个女子却要独自承担起养活包括自己情人和情敌在内的一大家人的重担,那是多么繁重的担子啊!况且,在亚特兰大,作为一个妇女,平时出门就也许会遭到别人的非议.可她,为了担负起此重担,不得不与黑人做生意.
斯佳丽就像一个小孩子一样,对自己想要的东西异常执着,而对自己所拥有的东西却不屑一顾.斯佳丽认为自己爱的是阿希礼,可是阿希礼却不爱她,就像白瑞特说的那样,阿希礼是个君子,只是生在了一个和他格格不入的时代.他还是用旧世界的游戏规则生活,只会撞得一鼻子灰.可是斯佳丽却不明白,越是得不到,难以实现的,就越追求不舍.可是,到最后才发现,她最爱的人一直就在自己身边却不曾意识到,等到明白时,却为时已晚.但斯佳丽就是斯佳丽,她没有绝望,她只是告诉自己:Tomorrow is another day!斯佳丽,始终就是这样一个充满生气,充满斗志的人.
小说中的另一个人,也是我最喜爱的人白瑞特.白瑞特有着良好的家世,却并不以此为荣.他有着锐利的眼睛,有着聪明的头脑,他能很快在乱世找到自己的处身之道.他的勇敢,执着,他的机智果断,都成为让人喜欢的因素,还有他放荡的外表下那颗专一的心也使人喜欢.他爱斯佳丽,保护斯佳丽,宠爱斯佳丽,照顾斯佳丽,他希望让她事事称心,可这些却被斯佳丽拒绝了,于是他一直耐心地等待,等待他爱的斯佳丽也能同样爱上他,可是再永恒的爱也会有磨光的时候.就这样,当他的女儿离开他时,他的心死了,再也回不来了.于是,他选择了离开.
读《飘》时,对斯佳丽面对困难所表现出来的大无畏精神佩服;对她有时为达目的而不择手段而反感;对她对阿希礼迟迟不肯放手的愚蠢固执而气愤;对白瑞特对斯佳丽的默默付出而倍感愉悦;对白瑞特最后的离开表示惋惜
